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++ My Little One ++ by ~thedreamwithin:iconthedreamwithin:

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++ My Little One ++
- thedreamwithin -

Once upon, upon a time
I fell in love with you.
I thought it was naught but a dream,
But now I know it's true.

I gazed into your blue, blue eyes
And whispered as you smiled.
I gave you a heart so full of love;
As innocent as a child.

But deep below, below the shell
Was where the flaws did lie;
Evidence of what I tried to mend
Alone and wondering why.

You smiled again, again at me
And pulled out a bit of glue.
You tore from yours and stuck to mine,
Mending it as it were new.

The flaws, the flaws; they were now fixed
As fixed as they ever would be!
The tears and cracks and holes and chunks
Were gone and whole and free!

"But no, my love, my love," I said
When you tried to hand it back.
"My heart is yours to love and hold,
Just please don't let it crack."

I placed, I placed it once again
Into your gentle hands.
You placed it on a pedestal
Where it would forever stand.

You showed, you showed me what love was
When you gave your heart to me,
Not just in exchage or to be polite,
But because it was meant to be.

You hugged and hugged and held me tight
While whispering in my ear
Before smiling and turning to face the crowd,
For all the world to hear:

"This is my little, my little one,
And forever shall she be.
I love my sweetie, my little one;
She was meant for me."
©2005-2010 ~thedreamwithin
:iconthedreamwithin:

Author's Comments

alright...another poem for you guys since you liked the last one so much. this one was ripped from one of my journals, and it's not the best, but i wanted to share it with you all anyway.

it's about my boyfriend, as you could have guessed, and yes that's a picture of my hottie up there. i lurve neil.. :heart:

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:icontorla:
~Torla Mar 21, 2005, 8:45:55 PM
OMG SHELLY! It's so awsome.


You are an awsome writter. It's so beautiful!

It makes my heart melt to read it.


*cheesy*AWWWWWWwwww

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Destroy something beautiful. It's the only thing worth destroying.
:iconthedreamwithin:
~thedreamwithin Mar 22, 2005, 5:27:38 AM
awwwwwwww....!
lol
*huggles* thanks so much for the fav and the comment..and for even reading it o.o'

*huggles some more*

--
[link] --- Check out my dragons! :3
[link] --- And my Minicity!
:iconbleedingdesire:
~BleedingDesire Mar 22, 2005, 9:56:24 AM
So beautiful!! :+favlove:

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let's spit at the stars.
:icontorla:
~Torla Mar 22, 2005, 12:05:50 PM
Of course I read it! DUH!

--
Destroy something beautiful. It's the only thing worth destroying.
:iconthedreamwithin:
~thedreamwithin Mar 22, 2005, 3:28:02 PM
well obviously.. XP

*luffles her neil*
...umm...you wouldn't happen to know where he is, would you? he's kinda...missing.. ;_;

--
[link] --- Check out my dragons! :3
[link] --- And my Minicity!
:iconthedreamwithin:
~thedreamwithin Mar 22, 2005, 3:28:21 PM
awww....! thanks so much!

--
[link] --- Check out my dragons! :3
[link] --- And my Minicity!
:iconmgdeath5:
~mgdeath5 Mar 22, 2005, 4:22:24 PM
Gosh, this could make anyone feel warm and fuzzy inside :aww:
:icontorla:
~Torla Mar 22, 2005, 5:00:13 PM
No I dunno...


Missing? That scares me sorta. I don't get on ET that often. And last time I talked to him he was in a bad mood and didn't seem too happy to see me.

Let me know as soon as you find him.

--
Destroy something beautiful. It's the only thing worth destroying.
:iconthedreamwithin:
~thedreamwithin Mar 22, 2005, 6:04:42 PM
well it scares me a helluva lot more than just "sorta"
i want to call him but i have to wait until my dad leaves the house...and he won't freaking leave ><
but then again, maybe there's nothing to worry about....he's on his spring break right now so maybe they went somewhere...

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[link] --- Check out my dragons! :3
[link] --- And my Minicity!
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